Can't wait for part 4 :)
Hey, nice work as always, Trevor!I like the details of when he swaps them.Just a little note, but didn't the previous addition say the he(his dad) was the boss? So it was a bit confusing as to who was yelling at him..I also enjoyed how you narrated the boy's thoughts so well, nicely done!.
Thank you, Curious. I'm really glad you enjoyed my work.By the way, I think the dad is a regional manager.
"Think" are you not the person who wrote it? xP
Can't wait for part 4 :)
ReplyDeleteHey, nice work as always, Trevor!
ReplyDeleteI like the details of when he swaps them.
Just a little note, but didn't the previous addition say the he(his dad) was the boss? So it was a bit confusing as to who was yelling at him.
.I also enjoyed how you narrated the boy's thoughts so well, nicely done!.
Thank you, Curious. I'm really glad you enjoyed my work.
DeleteBy the way, I think the dad is a regional manager.
"Think" are you not the person who wrote it? xP
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