Friday, April 25, 2014

Should Have Believed


4 comments:

  1. yep i liked the start of this story. but when they forget who they were its not as interesting anymore in my opinion so the end is disappointing.

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  2. i would like to see this by the son's pov

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  3. I love the idea that the new dad fully remembers being the son. but the dad in the sons body just cant fit that into his head, so he forgets. ^_^ I love when the kids get the new adult knowledge.

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  4. That is just such a perfect photo for a caption story...

    Derek

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