This story has tremendous potential, the pain of being behind him and not with him at the wedding, wanting to kiss him and just being able to give a handshake, the anguish of not being able to see him every day and suffering from no able to say "I love you" in spite of his great sacrifice and worse, seeing another man to live his dream !!! Good story but hopefully consider developing it a little more, Ryan seems not to mind his own destiny as an old man without love or without the love of his life
This story has tremendous potential, the pain of being behind him and not with him at the wedding, wanting to kiss him and just being able to give a handshake, the anguish of not being able to see him every day and suffering from no able to say "I love you" in spite of his great sacrifice and worse, seeing another man to live his dream !!!
ReplyDeleteGood story but hopefully consider developing it a little more, Ryan seems not to mind his own destiny as an old man without love or without the love of his life